Monday, January 23, 2012

Dave Hugelschaffer on Fire


Knocking ‘em Dead:
Killing your Victim


In the murder mystery business, a lot of bodies are bound to pile up. How the victims are killed is usually an integral part of the plot as the modus operandi will leave behind clues that move forward the investigation. When killing someone it is therefore important to consider how this pivotal event will guide your plotting. I would go so far as to advise one plot the investigation, then choose the cause of death that best fits the plot.

As the author of the Porter Cassel Mystery Series I have an unusual perspective on murder. The series revolves around the investigation of forest fires involving fatalities. What is particularly interesting with a forest fire is that a fatality does not have to be intentional for the determination of murder. If a fire is set intentionally, with no homicidal motivation, and someone is killed as a result of the fire, the arsonist is criminally responsible for the fatality. If the arsonist intended to kill using the fire, he is charged with first degree murder. If he didn’t intend to kill, he is charged with a lower count of murder, or manslaughter. Either way, the arsonist is on the hook, and this has allowed me considerable scope in the development of murder mystery series based on fire investigation.

Another interesting facet of fire investigation is the relationship between arson and other related crimes. Arson is often used as a secondary crime to obliterate evidence of a primary crime, with the obvious motivation to avoid detection and prosecution. For example, a murder may be covered up by setting the crime scene—either a building or a forest—on fire. This is an efficient way to sanitize a crime scene as fire will destroy virtually all fingerprints and most biological evidence. It also complicates a crime scene as the fire will wreak havoc with the surrounding environment, increasing the difficulty of locating the crime scene. Add to this frequent unintentional contamination of the scene by firefighters unaware of the sinister existence of another, more serious crime, and you have a highly complex murder to solve—therefore a complex investigation. Even without murder, wildfire arson is statistically the most difficult crime in the world to solve.

If arson is used as a secondary crime, the author has almost unlimited options in how to bump off the victim. Hang them, shoot them, stab them, poison them. Read them bad poetry until they do themselves in. Once they’re dead, burn the body and surrounding area. In fact, the victim doesn’t need to be killed where the fire is set—they can be killed elsewhere and the body moved. Now you’ve got two geographically separate crime scenes. Writing an effective and satisfying mystery is about making the murder as complicated as possible. Keep in mind, as you’re complicating the killing, that you’ll need to solve the crime, or crimes, in a logical and believable manner. Don’t paint yourself into a corner. Do the research. I love research—in fact, I find it more interesting than writing. Learning new things. Gaining access to places and people you would never have if you weren’t an author. But that’s a subject for another time. For now, rub your hands together with sinister glee, and plan to kill someone.

On paper, of course. Authors are nice people.


Dave Hugelschaffer is the author of the Porter Cassel mystery series, based on forest fire investigation. As a former forest ranger and wild land firefighter, he writes from a position of experience that provides the series with authenticity, and the reader insight into a world rarely explored in mystery fiction.



Monday, January 9, 2012

Melodie Campbell Takes Aim

I Could Just Shoot Them!

Murder and mystery – as crime writers, we relish these words. And for many of us, firearms are the weapons of choice for finishing off fictional victims. However, I have a beef about how writers sometimes deal with firearms in their novels, to which I say:
I could just shoot them for not doing their homework!

My own research came early. I grew up on the furthest street up the side of a mountain in West Vancouver. We regularly had bears clawing the wooden front door and cougars roaming through our yard. With the forest mere feet away, we did not venture out into the woods without a rifle.

So – from an early age, I was handling firearms, specifically a 22 with sniper sights, a 30-0-6, and a shotgun. Later, I acquired a Marlin takedown carbine, which fit me perfectly. (Carbines are shorter than rifles; takedown carbines can be disassembled to about half their length.) In my thirties, I became proficient and competitive with a competition 22 handgun.

Which brings me to Things that drive me nuts in novels:

1. Magazines do not fall out of revolvers. Revolvers are called that for a reason: they have a rotating cylinder into which you load rounds of ammunition.

2. Revolvers are very nice for accuracy and reliability. “Six sure shots” are what we used to say. However, they need to be cocked. If you don’t cock a 38 or 45 caliber revolver, then your pull action has to be very, very strong – probably stronger than most women are comfortable doing. And that throws off your aim.

Which brings me to:
3. Don’t just have your character pull a gun and shoot. It drives me crazy when people just spray bullets all over the place. The character should aim. He or she should look down the sights of the firearm to line up with a target.

Example from School for Burglars (Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine, July/August 2007) “She lifted the gun, lined up the sights and fired.”

4. Two-shot Derringers – the kind you can stick in a silk stocking if you are not worried about shooting your toes off – aren’t accurate worth a damn.

5. Your petite protagonist will not pick up a 12 gauge shotgun, put it to her shoulder, and calmly fire. A shotgun will put not-so-petite me on my butt, if I try to shoot it like a rifle. I shoot from the hip. Even then, one might get bruised and knocked back. Better to give her a rifle, or takedown carbine.

6. About hair triggers: I nearly shot off my foot while holding a heavy crossbow with a hair trigger. Those things are dangerous! You don’t have to pull at all - a mere touch will fire them. You can use this to your advantage when writing, but be aware what it means.

Final words: If you are not completely familiar with firearms, why not stick to the tried and true methods of murder: the rope, the candlestick and the lead pipe.


Don't look for bullets in Rowena Through the Wall (No. 2 on Amazon.ca top 100 fantasy-futuristic bestseller list, Aug 2011!). Swords, sorcery and the ballistic stew are the weapons of the day. Rowena Through the Wall is available at Indigo.ca, Amazon.com, Amazon.ca, Amazon.uk, Amazon.de, Amazon.it, Smashwords, and Barnes & Noble.

Melodie Campbell has a Commerce degree from Queen's University, but it didn't take well. She has been a bank manager, marketing director, comedy writer, college instructor and possibly the worst runway model ever. Melodie has over 200 publications including over 30 short stories and 100 humour credits. She has won five awards for fiction.